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Four cover letter mistakes recruiters notice

TARGETjobs on four common phrases that weaken a cover letter, and what to write instead.

A short, practical read from TARGETjobs (by Abigail Lewis) on lines that sound fine to the writer but put recruiters off.

  1. "Words can't express how excited I am." A recruiter may read this as trouble communicating. Give specific reasons for wanting the role instead.
  2. "My skills mean I can excel in any role." Too generic. Connect your experience to this job's criteria.
  3. "Your prestigious and vibrant company." Vague flattery suggests you haven't done your research. Mention something specific about them.
  4. "I have great attention to detail." It invites scrutiny, especially next to a typo. Let your accuracy show instead.

Good for: a final check before you send a cover letter.

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