A short, practical read from TARGETjobs (by Abigail Lewis) on lines that sound fine to the writer but put recruiters off.
- "Words can't express how excited I am." A recruiter may read this as trouble communicating. Give specific reasons for wanting the role instead.
- "My skills mean I can excel in any role." Too generic. Connect your experience to this job's criteria.
- "Your prestigious and vibrant company." Vague flattery suggests you haven't done your research. Mention something specific about them.
- "I have great attention to detail." It invites scrutiny, especially next to a typo. Let your accuracy show instead.
Good for: a final check before you send a cover letter.
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